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LIL' Lou
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since 06-02-2000
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OKlahoma


0 posted 06-08-2000 02:07 PM       View Profile for LIL' Lou   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LIL' Lou

SING  


When I sing my soul Feels free
Like i am flying
High above a tree

I have been told i was Good
Been Told that i could

But where they true
I think so
For I am LOU


And For Every shall I SING!  :>



 Love is like a rainbow,
Each color has a differnt meaning.
Lauren Lou
© Copyright 2000 Lauren LOU - All Rights Reserved
PinkANGEL
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1 posted 06-08-2000 02:30 PM       View Profile for PinkANGEL   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for PinkANGEL

Lou  I really like your poems  they never put n e one down
LIL' Lou
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2 posted 06-08-2000 04:49 PM       View Profile for LIL' Lou   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LIL' Lou

Thanx PInk ANgel I try not to everone is special and i try to express that in my poems :> Well most of em
LOU


 Love is like a rainbow,
Each color has a differnt meaning.
Lauren Lou
TearsOfPearls
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Vereeniging, South-Africa


3 posted 06-09-2000 04:00 PM       View Profile for TearsOfPearls   Email TearsOfPearls   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for TearsOfPearls

I like this poem, it is simple but it says alot about your personallity I'd say. A person that sees the good in everything and everyone!

Nice poem  

 Waves...amazing hey? Wind blowing over smoothe ocean water creates shear. The longer the wind blows, and the futher the fetch, the more energy gets transferred from the wind to the water. What started off as a breeze 1 000km away, ends up as a glass-faced barrel at some far off beach.
LIL' Lou
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OKlahoma


4 posted 06-09-2000 04:59 PM       View Profile for LIL' Lou   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LIL' Lou

Thanx tears I really think that was what i was trying to do with this poem!
LOVE LOU  


 Love is like a rainbow,
Each color has a differnt meaning.
Lauren Lou
zeke
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5 posted 06-09-2000 10:40 PM       View Profile for zeke   Email zeke   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for zeke

I like your poem a lot.  It is easily understandable, but at the same time it expressed your feelings in a powerful way.
Keep writing
JennyeMeshan
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since 02-15-2000
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Cecil, Wisconsin USA


6 posted 06-10-2000 04:47 PM       View Profile for JennyeMeshan   Email JennyeMeshan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JennyeMeshan

hey you,
When I sing I feel pretty much the same way. Very nice poem and have a great day!
~JeNnYeMeShAn  

 "If thou can wait then thou shall stay"
-Destiny's Child

LIL' Lou
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7 posted 06-15-2000 03:18 PM       View Profile for LIL' Lou   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LIL' Lou

Thanx Jenny
I guess singers feel that way!


 Love is like a rainbow,
Each color has a differnt meaning.
Lauren Lou
LIL' Lou
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OKlahoma


8 posted 06-27-2000 11:38 AM       View Profile for LIL' Lou   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LIL' Lou

thanx zeke this poem was fun to write!
LOU


Love is like a rainbow,
Each color has a differnt meaning.
Lauren Lou
Artic Wind
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9 posted 11-15-2007 07:29 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND
 
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