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Master
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since 08-18-99
Posts 1880
Boston, MA


0 posted 06-08-2000 01:03 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

Each night, I am deprived of sleep and rest
Three grueling weeks and I have just begun.
It started as a game, -- now Iím obsessed,
The cards were dealt,-- His will is left undone!
With every note my Fate is drawing near
The melody resounds in her steps
Oh Melpomene, my heart is filled with fear,
I'm tangled in my notes, -- my wicked webs.
Iím wove each line with Ariadneís thread
My Requiem is due, Iíve lost my touch...
ďDo take the ink that Iíve already bled
Thereís blood in me, -- donít hold it as a grudge!Ē

© Copyright 2000 Andrey Kneller - All Rights Reserved
amazon_lover
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since 04-09-2000
Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland


1 posted 06-08-2000 06:02 PM       View Profile for amazon_lover   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amazon_lover

its bad and I wish you recover soon , take control of yur emotions.

Sincerly
A_L
Jeffyf
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since 05-28-2000
Posts 48
Muncie, IN


2 posted 06-08-2000 09:06 PM       View Profile for Jeffyf   Email Jeffyf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffyf

The words speak to me with an amazing amount of power.  I am a musician and composer, and many a night I have been up working on a new piece.  Always the notes speak, and only I can listen.  This poem gives me inspiration for another.  Thank you very much for the post.
Jeffy
anonymousfemale
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since 02-02-2000
Posts 6304
Limbo


3 posted 06-08-2000 11:12 PM       View Profile for anonymousfemale   Email anonymousfemale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for anonymousfemale

Master: I have not been in here for quite a while and therefore I have missed out on some good poetry. This is another great piece once again by you. The words really struck a cord with me. The way that it was written was nice and the entire theme was really good.

Great work.

~AF~

 "Poetry is the language in which man explores his own amazement."
Christopher Fry

DragonFang
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since 03-09-2000
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Missouri, USA


4 posted 06-08-2000 11:37 PM       View Profile for DragonFang   Email DragonFang   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DragonFang's Home Page   View IP for DragonFang

Hey man, no matter how bad things get, they will get better if you just hang in there. Great sounding poem though.

 "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \
I am lost in my own mind.

Some say the world will end in fire,
Some say in ice
From what I've tasted of desire,
I hold with those who favor fire.
But if it had to perish twice,
I think I know enough of hate
To say that for destruction ice
Is also great,
And would suffice.
-Robert Frost
Master
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5 posted 06-09-2000 12:10 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

Some of you guys were a little off in interpreting this piece,

Jeffyf, thanks for understanding me and good luck with your work!
zeke
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since 06-09-2000
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6 posted 06-09-2000 10:47 PM       View Profile for zeke   Email zeke   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for zeke

Awesome poem.  I really like the ideas of weaving the lines of your writing and having it turn from a game to obsession.  This was the first of your poetry that I have read, but now I will be sure to look for more.  
Novacaine For The Soul
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since 05-26-2000
Posts 129
New Orleans


7 posted 06-09-2000 10:59 PM       View Profile for Novacaine For The Soul   Email Novacaine For The Soul   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Novacaine For The Soul

dear master:
     *waa haa haa* it's been a long time since i've read your work, but you've done again old chap... how old are you again?... this is a brilliant piece and i think i'm going to have to look up some of your earlier-posted works that i've forgotten in my time of absense... keep up the wonderful work and i'll keep an eye out for your future writings... oh yes, and best of luck to you on those compositions, whether in melody or poesy...

sincerely,
a sad tomato

 you're such a beautiful freak... i wish there were more just like you...
Master
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Boston, MA


8 posted 06-10-2000 05:32 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

Zeke, thanks for repsonding... I was inspired by the movie Amadeus... I recommend it to you if you haven't seen it.

N for the Soul, where have you been? Thanks for the compliments, although I don't think that I deserve your praise... As far as composing, I've never had an ear for music, but I'll keep on writing poetry. Thanks!
Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural


9 posted 11-15-2007 07:23 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND
 
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