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Jeremy Halstead
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since 06-01-2000
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Morris, Ill. U.S.A


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Talk

Simple segments conveyed by mouth;
simple in their sound.
Simple not in emotion or heart
or what they may have found.

Eternal chatter, filling time;
substance not aloud
Killing tension, killing hours
like a snow white cloud.

Words of meaning, great in depth
are sent to those who hurt.
Soothing sounds of a companions love
filtering out the dirt.

Simply stated or rambled in vien
or pounded by the chalk...
every word is relevent
when people sit and talk.

Jeremy D. Halstead


 
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LeeAnne Dk
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since 06-07-2000
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1 posted 06-08-2000 10:30 AM       View Profile for LeeAnne Dk   Email LeeAnne Dk   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LeeAnne Dk

Hello there, I have to say that that was a great poem. It really says it all about talking. Good job..:P
TearsOfPearls
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Posts 323
Vereeniging, South-Africa


2 posted 06-08-2000 02:17 PM       View Profile for TearsOfPearls   Email TearsOfPearls   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for TearsOfPearls

Great poem, I loved it and like Lee anne said, it says everything.

Great jog  

 Waves...amazing hey? Wind blowing over smoothe ocean water creates shear. The longer the wind blows, and the futher the fetch, the more energy gets transferred from the wind to the water. What started off as a breeze 1 000km away, ends up as a glass-faced barrel at some far off beach.
CLBinLOVE
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since 06-04-2000
Posts 147
Hilton Head, SC, USA


3 posted 06-08-2000 03:02 PM       View Profile for CLBinLOVE   Email CLBinLOVE   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CLBinLOVE

i liked this one, it conveys to the reader the importance of talking AND listening, and makes the person remeber a good or bad time with evbery rythem, i like it alot

 always follow your heart, never follow others unless it is truely where you want to go, and never give up a dream, maybe just set it aside for a while... :)
amazon_lover
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since 04-09-2000
Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland


4 posted 06-08-2000 04:37 PM       View Profile for amazon_lover   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amazon_lover

Hi Jeremy
I like to listen more to people than talking myself and I believe that its not encouragin. sincerity while talking is very essential in  the understanding of people.

Sincerely
A_L
Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural


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Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND
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