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amazon_lover
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since 04-09-2000
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Dublin,Ireland


0 posted 06-07-2000 06:42 PM       View Profile for amazon_lover   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for amazon_lover

We had become so close over the years
Your parting from this relationship put me in tears
When I look back I see wonderful memmories
I wish I could be one of those li'l fairies

I was just a lonely cloud drifting aimlessly
You came without any invitation flawlessly
You filled my thoughts and dreams
All you've forgotten it seems

You are my best friend and love
We'll stay like that forever
Though what you've really stings
But pain is lessened by joy memmory brings

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CLBinLOVE
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since 06-04-2000
Posts 147
Hilton Head, SC, USA


1 posted 06-07-2000 08:33 PM       View Profile for CLBinLOVE   Email CLBinLOVE   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CLBinLOVE

wow, i JUST wrote something about friends too, about memories and things like that
this is a very good poem, well writen, good analgies, a feeling of pain yet a feeling of the need to move on as well
very nice

 always follow your heart, never follow others unless it is truely where you want to go, and never give up a dream, maybe just set it aside...:)
Crystalina123
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since 01-31-2000
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2 posted 06-08-2000 11:05 AM       View Profile for Crystalina123   Email Crystalina123   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Crystalina123

I really like this poem. It hits really close to home. Nice work.

Love,
Crystal

 "The worst of what people do to one another is deceive.
Because when you love someone you control their version
of reality. If you lie to them that's like making them
autistic so that what they believe is reality is in fact,
not their true situation at all."

It's not the angry words that break the heart, it's the silence.

Someone said that true love is like a ghost -- often spoke of but never seen.
I've seen both and yet in my darkest hours, tend to believe that neither exits.
zeke
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3 posted 06-09-2000 10:52 PM       View Profile for zeke   Email zeke   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for zeke

I can really relate to the theme discussed in your poem.  The joys and pains in life will eventually be forever cherished as memories.  Excellent way to state these experiences.
Artic Wind
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since 09-16-2007
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Realm of Supernatural


4 posted 11-15-2007 07:08 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND
 
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