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Love Sucks

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Acies
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0 posted 06-07-2000 05:33 PM       View Profile for Acies   Email Acies   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Acies

How I wonder why it had to be this way
Forever in my life, I wanted you to stay
Everyday I wake up, tears in my eyes, still loving you
Hoping and praying that you'd feel the same way for me too

I dream of the things, with you, I could have done
Being together, forever with you, just having fun
You're the first one I ever loved, that I could honestly say
Didn't know what to do then for I really haven't felt that way

I'm still thinking of what I did wrong and why we fell apart
Though I lied to you and made you cry right from the start
I know I made a lot of mistakes that probably made you mad
Believe me, one thing I'd never intentionally do is make you sad

Now all I have is a broken heart filled with loneliness
My life is nothing without you, I'm all torn into pieces
Though it's hard having this feeling of uncertainty
I just can't move on cause it's gonna be really hard for me

Being a fool, waiting forever, that I know I should do
For the only thing that matters to me now is to be with you
Everyday I pray you'd come back in my life, though it's very unlikely
Please try to understand, loving you is all that means to me




[This message has been edited by acire (edited 06-10-2000).]
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Crystalina123
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1 posted 06-08-2000 11:23 AM       View Profile for Crystalina123   Email Crystalina123   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Crystalina123

Hey my dear,
I felt the same way after my ex and IU broke up. While I can't say you ever truly stop missing them, the pain eventually does just die down to a dull ache. Not very optimistic, I know  ) *shrugs* tis life I guess!!

Crystal

 "The worst of what people do to one another is deceive.
Because when you love someone you control their version
of reality. If you lie to them that's like making them
autistic so that what they believe is reality is in fact,
not their true situation at all."

It's not the angry words that break the heart, it's the silence.

Someone said that true love is like a ghost -- often spoke of but never seen.
I've seen both and yet in my darkest hours, tend to believe that neither exits.
mickel2995
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2 posted 06-10-2000 12:38 AM       View Profile for mickel2995   Email mickel2995   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mickel2995

Hey hun!
Well it looks as though you and I have been down this same bath before, but then again- who hasn't?  This road of so called "love" is hard, I know.  You get so tired of going to bed crying, waking up crying, and walking around all day with an immense feeling of pain, heartache, and lonleyness.  This poem describes what you go through and the feelings sooooo well!!! And hey, sooner than later the pain and bitterness do go away.   Good work!!  I'll look for more of your postings!! With love, Micale
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3 posted 06-10-2000 12:30 PM       View Profile for Acies   Email Acies   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Acies

mickel2995 thanks for your generous review
if you want to read my other poems, check dark passions, i've posted 6 poems there so far
anonymousfemale
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4 posted 09-08-2001 08:07 AM       View Profile for anonymousfemale   Email anonymousfemale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for anonymousfemale

Once again, another lovely piece from you. The sadness is so potent in this one. You had a good rhyming thingy happening throughout whilst expressing what was really in your heart.

I hope things are better with you these days then back then. Keep smiling.  

~AF~

"Kelly's my Hero!" "No, Kelly's your heroine." "Kelly has heroin??" "What?"

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5 posted 11-15-2007 07:47 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND
 
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