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Acies
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0 posted 06-07-2000 03:13 PM       View Profile for Acies   Email Acies   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Acies


As I think of you and close my eyes
Someone please hold me tight
Tell me that I'm just dreaming
Because it hurts me deep inside

I'd like you to feel how I miss you so much
How I miss your warm, caring, and gentle touch
Your cute little face in my mind
Your soft and innocent lips touching mine

I miss running my fingers thru your hair
The feeling in my heart knowing you did care
I miss the limited times we spent with each other
How I wanted it to last and be with you forever

That sharp but mysterious look in your eyes
You look so cute when you bite your lower lip as you smile
That devlish grin that shows as you stare right at me
I miss you so much, alone in the dark, feeling so lonely

You're the only one I've always wanted
A fool, I am, I took you for granted
Now here I am, holding on to the memories
Left only with hope slowly drowning in my own tears

Now I realize how much you really mean to me
I miss you so much, that I want you to see
Why only now, I don't know, I must have been blind
My broken heart is in your hands, please be kind

All I can say is, "I'm sorry, please forgive me"
It may not be enough, but I don't know what else to do
I"m not asking you for one last chance
Baby, all I want you to know is that "I Love You"
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1 posted 06-08-2000 02:45 PM       View Profile for TearsOfPearls   Email TearsOfPearls   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for TearsOfPearls

It's a problem we all have, realize only what we had when it's gone.

This poem is lovely, I hope you gave it to her.

Good luck.

 Waves...amazing hey? Wind blowing over smoothe ocean water creates shear. The longer the wind blows, and the futher the fetch, the more energy gets transferred from the wind to the water. What started off as a breeze 1 000km away, ends up as a glass-faced barrel at some far off beach.
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2 posted 06-10-2000 12:34 PM       View Profile for Acies   Email Acies   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Acies

i did give it to her, but i never got a reaction back
i guess it was too late
mickel2995
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3 posted 06-10-2000 01:27 PM       View Profile for mickel2995   Email mickel2995   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mickel2995

WOW~!!!  this is so incredible! YOu always have such a wonderful way of expressing yourself, and you get the point through quite directly.  It's incredible!!! But when it's to late, you know it is then not meant to be and something better will come along.  Keep up the wonderful work!!!  With love, Micale.
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4 posted 06-10-2000 09:05 PM       View Profile for Acies   Email Acies   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Acies

Mickel295
thanks for you generous review
I'm glad that someone appreciates my poems the way you do.
thanks again
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5 posted 06-20-2001 02:53 PM       View Profile for Jenn Cirrincione   Email Jenn Cirrincione   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jenn Cirrincione

Aww, well B, this is very sad.  
I realized I hadn't replied to a lot of your old stuff so here I am. I hope the regret has subsided. Are you gonna write for us ever again?  

Jenn

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6 posted 09-08-2001 08:04 AM       View Profile for anonymousfemale   Email anonymousfemale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for anonymousfemale

Aww Acire, man this is so sad. 3 guesses as to who it's about. You've exposed your heart here and bared it all for us to see. I like this because you're really telling it like it and for once, aren't saying you'll get over it. You truly miss this girl and it comes across in this piece.

Well done.

~AF~

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7 posted 11-15-2007 07:46 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

Enjoyed

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