Teen Poetry #2 |
When Angels Cry |
StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Have you ever heard angels cry? It’s what happens when you’ve lost everything you thought you had. It’s beyond the feeling of mad and past the point of sad. My dear friend, I’ve heard angels cry And to you I will tell no lie, It’s the day when all the rain pours down And when the queen looses her crown It’s when inside your heartaches And it’s when you begin to break All your feelings begin to quickly die They die when angels cry You lose your mind, you go insane And all the world is so mundane Have you ever seen angels cry? It’s what happens when all the world begins to lie It’s what happens when the see you not try Angels cry when the world loses hope And when inside you truly can’t cope When you start to not care Is when they are there Watching and waiting for you to find them Hoping that they aren’t the ones you condemn The world keeps moving and so do you But with out you they are soo blue Don’t lie, don’t cheat, and don’t you steal Because when angels cry it’s all so real. |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Hi Star I see your point. It's a beautiful theme. Sincerely A_L |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
Ah, that is a very touching poem. I very much enjoyed reading it. Keep up the good work. "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \ I am lost in my own mind. Some say the world will end in fire, Some say in ice From what I've tasted of desire, I hold with those who favor fire. But if it had to perish twice, I think I know enough of hate To say that for destruction ice Is also great, And would suffice. -Robert Frost |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
Hey Jess, I really liked the idea behind that one. very creative. keep me in suspence. |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
HeY EvErYoNe! ThAnKs FoR yOuR rEpLiEs! It MeAnS a LoT tO kNoW hOw YoU aLl FeEl AbOuT mY wOrK!! =0) tHiS pOeM iS nOt OnE oF mY bEsT i WaS sOrT oF hAvInG a LiTtLe BiT oF a WrItEr'S bLoCk! LoVe YoU aLl!! LoVe AlWaYs~*~JeSsIcA LyNn~*~ |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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