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mickel2995
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since 05-24-2000
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0 posted 06-07-2000 12:46 AM       View Profile for mickel2995   Email mickel2995   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mickel2995

I thought I loved you,
but I wasn't quite sure,
This feeling of incontenment
makes all my days a blur.
I thought you loved me,
but I wasn't quite sure,
but you proved you didn't when you went
and got another "her".
Just when I think we takes two steps forward,
I find we've only taken three back.
I am going to quit trying,
hence my heart is filled with sorrow.
One more thing I must say before I go,
you must remember, there's no tomorrow.
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Jeremy Halstead
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since 06-01-2000
Posts 572
Morris, Ill. U.S.A


1 posted 06-07-2000 02:59 AM       View Profile for Jeremy Halstead   Email Jeremy Halstead   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeremy Halstead

Well, all can say about the very first line is that if you "think" you love someone, then you don't.  It's like getting shot in the ass...if it happens, you don't say "Hey, I 'think' I just got shot in the ass.", you just know.  I'm not trying to be a smart ass, sorry if I sound cynical right now.  Over all, the peom shows that you have a lot of strength to just say goodbye.

Jeremy D. Halstead

 
amazon_lover
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since 04-09-2000
Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland


2 posted 06-07-2000 10:33 AM       View Profile for amazon_lover   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amazon_lover

Hi Mickel
I know the trauma when you see your love drifitng away and its too painful. But when we quit trying evrything ends up with 'What is ' and thats not a good feeling.

Sincerely
A_L
mickel2995
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since 05-24-2000
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3 posted 06-07-2000 11:31 PM       View Profile for mickel2995   Email mickel2995   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mickel2995

Thanks for your replies guys, i think you are both right in what you have to say, but to say good-bye is hard, and it's even harder to learn how. Thanks again.
    Micale
StarPryncess17
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since 05-31-2000
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4 posted 06-08-2000 05:52 PM       View Profile for StarPryncess17   Email StarPryncess17   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit StarPryncess17's Home Page   View IP for StarPryncess17

Cale~ Well, knowing who this poem is about gives it a lot more meaning. I love you so much and just because he can't realize the great person that he is losing, doesn't mean he isn't. He is losing the greatest girl in the world...why? Because you don't deserve his bull! I am so proud of you for saying good bye. Hey when are you coming over so we can go to the pool and watch all the hot guys swim?!!? LoL I love you girl! SISTAHS-4-EVER!! Love 2 Love Ya! Love Always ~*~Jessica Lynn~~*~
Artic Wind
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5 posted 11-15-2007 07:07 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND
 
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