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mickel2995
Junior Member
since 2000-05-24
Posts 48


0 posted 2000-06-07 12:46 PM


I thought I loved you,
but I wasn't quite sure,
This feeling of incontenment
makes all my days a blur.
I thought you loved me,
but I wasn't quite sure,
but you proved you didn't when you went
and got another "her".
Just when I think we takes two steps forward,
I find we've only taken three back.
I am going to quit trying,
hence my heart is filled with sorrow.
One more thing I must say before I go,
you must remember, there's no tomorrow.

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Jeremy Halstead
Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A
1 posted 2000-06-07 02:59 AM


Well, all can say about the very first line is that if you "think" you love someone, then you don't.  It's like getting shot in the ass...if it happens, you don't say "Hey, I 'think' I just got shot in the ass.", you just know.  I'm not trying to be a smart ass, sorry if I sound cynical right now.  Over all, the peom shows that you have a lot of strength to just say goodbye.

Jeremy D. Halstead

 

amazon_lover
Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland
2 posted 2000-06-07 10:33 AM


Hi Mickel
I know the trauma when you see your love drifitng away and its too painful. But when we quit trying evrything ends up with 'What is ' and thats not a good feeling.

Sincerely
A_L

mickel2995
Junior Member
since 2000-05-24
Posts 48

3 posted 2000-06-07 11:31 PM


Thanks for your replies guys, i think you are both right in what you have to say, but to say good-bye is hard, and it's even harder to learn how. Thanks again.
    Micale

StarPryncess17
Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932
Colorado
4 posted 2000-06-08 05:52 PM


Cale~ Well, knowing who this poem is about gives it a lot more meaning. I love you so much and just because he can't realize the great person that he is losing, doesn't mean he isn't. He is losing the greatest girl in the world...why? Because you don't deserve his bull! I am so proud of you for saying good bye. Hey when are you coming over so we can go to the pool and watch all the hot guys swim?!!? LoL I love you girl! SISTAHS-4-EVER!! Love 2 Love Ya! Love Always ~*~Jessica Lynn~~*~
Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
5 posted 2007-11-15 07:07 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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