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Brom
Junior Member
since 2000-06-06
Posts 16


0 posted 2000-06-06 04:15 AM


So Many Nights

So many nights I have dreamt.
Of holding you in my arms.
Resting your head on my shoulder.

So many nights I have dreamt.
Of looking into your eyes.
And telling you how much I love you.

So many nights I have dreamt.
Of kissing your lips.
As I run my hand thru your hair.

So many nights I have dreamt.
Of feeling you breathe on my skin.
As we lay next to each other.

So many nights I have dreamt.
Of the day you would be mine.
So I would no longer have to dream.


© Copyright 2000 Adam Portman - All Rights Reserved
Jeremy Halstead
Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A
1 posted 2000-06-06 04:19 AM


I like the way you repeat the theme line, but follow it with a new elaboration in each stanza... I really like the last line...very catchy.

Jeremy Halstead

 

Brom
Junior Member
since 2000-06-06
Posts 16

2 posted 2000-06-06 04:23 AM


Thank you Jeremy. When I find more of my poems, they will surely be posted.  


 Love will be the end of us...

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