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SwEEt&iNnOcCeNt
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since 2000-03-09
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0 posted 2000-06-06 12:44 PM


Everyone has a best friend,
everyone has someone they can run to when their sad and know that, that person will cheer them up..

I'm so greatful to have a friend like that,
were not best friends but were best buddies,
who would have thought a girl and a guy being good buddies,

someone i can run to,
having him tell me everythings going to be okay
just makes me feel better.

him going to the movies with me when i was bored
having him stick up for me,
and just goofing around not worring what people think of us...

i have a special bond between me and him
he will always be my buddie,
that i will be by for the rest of my life

when the tears would run down my face
you where their
and when i had a broken heart
you where their

i want to thank you a million times
and more!!

Thank you for being their and sticking by me
ImOrTaLz.... good luck with your poems!!!

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SwEEt&iNnOcCeNt
Junior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 45

1 posted 2000-06-06 12:51 PM


LoL i know this is funny about me posting right after mine own...just wanted to say its confussing and that i missed spelled some words and my GRAMs not so well.. SORRY i did it off the top of my head and i knew my friend would be posting tonight because its his first time here... so i'm sorry that its messy..
ImOrTaLz
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since 2000-06-06
Posts 1

2 posted 2000-06-06 01:05 AM


'(¯`·._(-=-- 2 SwEEtIe --=-)_.·´¯)'

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww..............
*wipes the tears from his eye'z*
That's so sweet of you =).....
<----- doesn't know what 2 say.
I stole mah sis's crayola crayon's, ova 64 colorz(looks like a rainbow on my desk), imma writtin a story about a monkey dancing in the road in "el espanol" for miss. lawerences class. sure she'll love dis.
Weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee me'z hope yah will feel better inside. Just try to think happy thoughts(like in peter pan) and you'll fly, it'll be okie. My footz asleep and I need a pepsi, man.... it's freakin hot, imma go wander around in the kitchen for a while, be back in a bit. *hugz* be            
@-}--}----------------- ^_^
                       From: Imortalz
Pink Powa(cotton candie 4 eva)

P.S. Check out the Pokemon Forum   They have a lot to say for themselves. http://www.sas.upenn.edu/~ctung/Poke-Friends/main.html

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SwEEt&iNnOcCeNt
Junior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 45

3 posted 2000-06-06 09:29 AM


ImOrTaLz: hee, hee, you still crack me up.. but yeah i'm feeling better, but the pain will still be there and sooner then later (hopeing sooner) the pain will faid and i wont hurt anymore. but for now i'm dewlling in her leaving and trying to spend so much time with her so i can just have Happy thoughts when she leave's... but yeah... anyway i have to go... schools going to start soon and i have to shut down my moocow computer... hahaha.... your the only one that gets that.. but anyway take care and oh yeah i have your pepsi.. heheheheh
love always
your buddie
SwEEtIe

DragonFang
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since 2000-03-09
Posts 522
Missouri, USA
4 posted 2000-06-06 10:28 AM


Ahhhhh, that is a very sweet poem. I know how it is to have someone who wants nothing more than to see you happy, and I know it is a great feeling knowing that they are there for you whenever you're down. I think this poem is a great gift to your friend, and very well written.

 "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \
I am lost in my own mind.

Some say the world will end in fire,
Some say in ice
From what I've tasted of desire,
I hold with those who favor fire.
But if it had to perish twice,
I think I know enough of hate
To say that for destruction ice
Is also great,
And would suffice.
-Robert Frost

SwEEt&iNnOcCeNt
Junior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 45

5 posted 2000-06-06 06:22 PM


Dragon thank you for posting and i'm glad you enjoyed the poem i wrote to my friend that i can't live without... anyway i know we will be friends to the end of time because we each tested how strong our friendship is and i know he'll stand their right beside me until the day we no longer see each other on this earth... and vise versa.... its really weird too his birthday is a few hours befor mine... its really weird how were connected to each other... anyway thanks for posting hope to see yours really soon!!  

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