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Goodbye |
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SwEEt&iNnOcCeNt Junior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 45 |
Goodbye… Why do we ever have to say this word? It brings so much pain to people. Saying goodbye to a loved one, And its also hard to say goodbye To my little sister… Why did it ever have to come to this? Did I do something that made you want to move? Why can’t your parents be nicer? Why couldn’t they understand you? All these questions go through my mind, Not knowing which one made you leave the most, Makes me hurt even more… But the day is coming when I will have to say Goodbye The word I hate the most, Because it means you our leaving me, And I might not get to see you again. I thought it would be easy to do But its not its going to be even harder Because now I have to let go of you… But I will always love you As my little sister Best friend, And my one true friend… |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
Wow, for the first time in this forum, I almost cried reading something. You did such a fantastic job of taking one little word a milking every bit of meaning and emotion out of it. Excellent!!! Jeremy Halstead |
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SwEEt&iNnOcCeNt Junior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 45 |
Jeremy thank you for you posting... sorry if it almost made you cry i didn't want anyone to get that emotional over it.. that means i can't give it to her.. thank you for telling me that, i really needed to know that... thank you  , well i have to go see you later!!! |
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