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Wild Stupidity

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hoppy
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0 posted 06-05-2000 10:46 PM       View Profile for hoppy   Email hoppy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit hoppy's Home Page   View IP for hoppy

Here's a bit of an interesting poem i just shot off the top of my head.  Tell me what ya think about it if your bored.  


Fell on the ground, I think I.
Tore my heart into, I think you.
Want to hurt him bad, I think I.
Want me to go away, I think you.
Felt my heart break, I think I
You taught me well, I thank you.

6-5-00

 There's a fine line between genius and insanity. I have erased this line.
-- Oscar Levant

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Lucius Cade
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1 posted 06-06-2000 02:13 AM       View Profile for Lucius Cade   Email Lucius Cade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lucius Cade

Actually I thought how it was pretty interesting how after all that you thank her. Great poem, neat way to set it up.

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StarPryncess17
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2 posted 06-07-2000 05:50 PM       View Profile for StarPryncess17   Email StarPryncess17   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit StarPryncess17's Home Page   View IP for StarPryncess17

well, let's say it's very interesting. At first I was confused...but then, I thought about it and it made sense. great writing! keep 'em comin off the top of your head!!!=0) Love 2 Love ya ~*~Jessica~*~
Artic Wind
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3 posted 11-15-2007 07:05 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

Enjoyed

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