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CLBinLOVE Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 147Hilton Head, SC, USA |
well, i wrote this because ive been writing love poems all my life, and i wanted to do something different, that still came from the heart this is one of my biggest fears, put on paper, sorta... anyway, here it is: understanding i wish i could understand howy it feels to be you i wish that i could know why you do what you do when you describe to me your feelings i try to understand i try to see why you act and feel that your worth is that of sand but all it does is confuse me and i end up all in knots and i try all day to figure out whether i should tell you or not i dont know if its just me that thinks your not eating or am i wrong am i just not seeing because to me it seems that you dont eat enough but to you it seems that you can never lose enough i dont think your fat i dont think your plump i think ur perfect and you i would never dump so please dont tourture urself its not worth it the world wont think differently if you just lose that last little bit i telling you this because im scared i fear you'll end up in a hospital or worse, dead i hope u can help me i hope you can ease my fears because right now im so scared all i see is tears please stop this for me? always follow your heart, never follow others unless it is truely where you want to go, and never give up a dream, maybe just set it aside...:) |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
WOW! you have a wonderful way of expressing your fears, but your love at the same time!I'm really sorry that this is how you feel right now and that it scares you. Just be there I know this person will see what they are doing isn't helping their health or your relationship! Be very supportive! disorders are hard to deal with, try not to let her know you're not too scared because she needs you to be strong right now. Best Of Luck!!! Love ALways ~*~Jessica Lynn~*~ |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Wow, that was pretty good. I can't say that i can relate though. My advice to you? It's kind of a tricky subject, maybe you should just trust the person, or maybe you shouldn't. Sorry i couldn't be of more help, but still, good poem! -Bel |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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