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Something i have to say!!

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SwEEt&iNnOcCeNt
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0 posted 06-05-2000 07:11 PM       View Profile for SwEEt&iNnOcCeNt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SwEEt&iNnOcCeNt


Saying goodbye is the hardest thing anyone has to do.
Not only to a family member
But also to your best friend,

Growing up together,
Going through tuff times,
Picking each other up when we were down,
Growing old together will never happen anymore,

Giving me one last huge goodbye,
Not knowing when I will see you again,
So I stand here watching you wave goodbye to me.
Holding back the tears
Trying not to show the pain in my heat to the world
But I couldn't
I just saw my best friend leaving me,

But that is something Iím going to have to do
Not seeing you anymore
Having to hold you in my heart forever more
I will always love you,
Youíll always be my best friend
Even if youíre my little sister.

Love you forever more.

© Copyright 2000 SwEEt&iNnOcCeNt - All Rights Reserved
DragonFang
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1 posted 06-05-2000 07:37 PM       View Profile for DragonFang   Email DragonFang   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DragonFang's Home Page   View IP for DragonFang

ahhh, that's a very sweet poem. Tis also sweet your little sis is your best friend. I hope that you can visit her, or vise versa.

 "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \
I am lost in my own mind.

Some say the world will end in fire,
Some say in ice
From what I've tasted of desire,
I hold with those who favor fire.
But if it had to perish twice,
I think I know enough of hate
To say that for destruction ice
Is also great,
And would suffice.
-Robert Frost
SwEEt&iNnOcCeNt
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2 posted 06-05-2000 07:56 PM       View Profile for SwEEt&iNnOcCeNt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SwEEt&iNnOcCeNt

Dragon thanks for the respond's...
I hope to see some of yours posted soon..
well i have to go take care ..
StarPryncess17
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3 posted 06-05-2000 08:07 PM       View Profile for StarPryncess17   Email StarPryncess17   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit StarPryncess17's Home Page   View IP for StarPryncess17

Hey hun! this is a very touching yet sweet poem! You'll see her again! Whether it be today or a while from now it won't matter because you guys are eternal friends and you share a bond like no one else...Sisterhood. I'm glad to hear that sibling rivalry doesn't exist in ALL families these days! lol. Hope you guys see eachother soon! Keep up the good writing! Love Always ~*~Jessica Lynn~*~
SwEEt&iNnOcCeNt
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4 posted 06-06-2000 12:06 AM       View Profile for SwEEt&iNnOcCeNt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SwEEt&iNnOcCeNt

Thanks Jessica for you support.
We do fight a lot, but in turn
we love each other to death and would
die for each other...
but its something she has to do
and i dont blam her for not doing it
but its going to be hard on me
and my life... so thank you for the
support and i hope to see some of you poems... bye
Jeremy Halstead
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Morris, Ill. U.S.A


5 posted 06-07-2000 02:51 AM       View Profile for Jeremy Halstead   Email Jeremy Halstead   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeremy Halstead

My little sister moved away once when I was 15 and again when I was 17, she's been gone for three years now and I hardly get to see her.  She only lives 30 min. away, but we both work so much that even on the weekends it's tough to get to eachother.  When we were little, we fought horribly, but we haven't really fought in a couple years.  Not a day goes by that I don't talk about her to one of the guys in the factory or at a grocery store or something.  I hope you can keep your chin up.  Just remember that time heals all wounds and fades all scrars.  Someday, things will be better and you'll have a totally different set of problems, it's inevitable.

Jeremy D. Halstead

 
SwEEt&iNnOcCeNt
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6 posted 06-08-2000 12:48 AM       View Profile for SwEEt&iNnOcCeNt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SwEEt&iNnOcCeNt

Hey Jeremy thanks for your support i really need it! But some reason i dont think this time will heal. my heat is already broken even though she hasn't left yet. I know we had our bad times and good. but all and all were like best friends and i dont want to see her go! I know time will heal but i dont think it will heal very fast and anytime soon.. so i think i'm going to have a very long healing process... anyway thanks again take care much happenes to you  
4eva_at_heart
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7 posted 06-08-2000 03:17 AM       View Profile for 4eva_at_heart   Email 4eva_at_heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for 4eva_at_heart

this is a very sweet poem.
life can be hard and people do pass in and out

great post

Bec

 i never thought i'd die alone, i laughed the loudest who'd have known?
i traced the cord back to the wall, no wonder it was never plugged in at all
i took my time, i hurried up
the choice was mine i didn't think enough
I'm too depressed to go on, you'll be sorry when i'm gone
I never conquered, rarely came
16 just held such better days
Days when i still felt alive, we couldn't wait to get outside
The world was wide, too late to try
The tour was over i'd survived
I couldn't wait till i got home, to pass the time in my room alone
I never thought i'd die alone, another six months I'll be unknown
Give all my things to my friends, you'll never set foot in my room again
You'll close it off, board it up
Remember the time i spilled the cup
Of apple juice in the hall, please tell mum this is not her fault
I never conquered, rarely came
But tomorrow holds such better days
Days when i can still feel alive, when i can't wait to get outside
The world was wide, the time goes by
The tour is over, i've survived
I can't wait till i get home, to pass the time in my room alone

'Adam's Song'
Blink 182
SwEEt&iNnOcCeNt
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8 posted 06-08-2000 11:32 PM       View Profile for SwEEt&iNnOcCeNt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SwEEt&iNnOcCeNt

Hey Bec,
thanks you for responding....  i really need all the help and support i need... hope to see your poems really soon!! got to jet.. take care...

S&I
ChibiDeathscythe
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9 posted 06-09-2000 02:11 PM       View Profile for ChibiDeathscythe   Email ChibiDeathscythe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ChibiDeathscythe

I really loved that poem.... it makes me want to go and hug my sister right now! lol =) keep writing!
SwEEt&iNnOcCeNt
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10 posted 06-09-2000 06:45 PM       View Profile for SwEEt&iNnOcCeNt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SwEEt&iNnOcCeNt

ChibiDeathscythe: thanks for the respond's, hey why don't you, you never know one day something might happen to her, she might move, and you wont see her anymore, i have about 4 days left with my little sister then i will not see her again till she's 18 and i'm in college... so think about how you treat your sister and vise versa then you know how hard it would be having to say goodbye!!!!  
Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural


11 posted 11-15-2007 07:08 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND
 
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