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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Go and be with her! My loving feelings you did deter I'm tired of your S*** So no longer will I just sit Don't think I'll always be here Because I finally looked in the mirror I can go and find someone else You lied to me. Your feelings were false You're not going to hurt me any more It's time for me to pick my heart up off the floor She can't be better than me Why is it that you can't see? But of course! why didn't I think of it before? She'll give you her virginity...all that and more I don't care you can have her! Yes my dear, I can do better! You took my heart and true feelings and ran Now from my heart you are forever banned! Don't come crawling back to me You won't be getting any sympathy I don't trust you any more It seems you enjoyed watching my tears fall to the floor I still love you yes it's true But all you do is leave me sad and blue So please just take yourself and make a better way Because I feel the need to run away So good bye, Good bye You're no longer the twinkle in my eye. |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Hi SP If it's such a fragile love that it can find another so easily give up on it. I know it's difficult and I've felt it but longer you hold on to it , you ruin your life and happiness which will never be restored. Sincerely A_L |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
A_L is right, a love so one sided is something that if you don't let go (although time is the only cure)it will scar you for a long time, trust me. Again, the attitude spewed from lines line a busted water main. Can't wait till you find a you treats you right, then we'll get to all read the great things you can do with that intensity in a positive way... not to say that I don't enjoy what you have now. just keep it all comin and you'll be fine. Jeremy |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
It's a wonderful game that we played Atleast I enjoyed the game Me showing the maximum of love You returning it with a sense of doubt I guess the game ended when you moved to face the next round opponent You gave a beautiful ending I guess you're too good at it You've beaten me in straight sets I love you lady I just love the way you played Your elegance is too good Your deceptive volleys makes you a sure winner I guess you knew it from beginning to end But I thought our love would never end Still I'm trying to figure out was it all just a game But now I've become well-versed in it you see Not that I would play a game But atleast I would understand if its all just a game Sincerely A_L |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Hi SP I just wrote a poem and post it wrongly. sorry for that. A_L |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
 Hey A_L sorry I didn't see that before! It is wonderfully written!  I love the way your piece your words together to hold a deeper meaning!  Keep up the writing! Love Always~*~Jessica Lynn~*~  |
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Crystalina123 Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 228 |
I've felt quite similar to the way you feel now. Without rehashing my screwed up life, lets just say that I think this is wonderfully written. You definately (sp?) expressed your feelings at the time which is always a good thing. Love, Crystal "The worst of what people do to one another is deceive. Because when you love someone you control their version of reality. If you lie to them that's like making them autistic so that what they believe is reality is in fact, not their true situation at all." It's not the angry words that break the heart, it's the silence. Someone said that true love is like a ghost -- often spoke of but never seen. I've seen both and yet in my darkest hours, tend to believe that neither exits. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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