Teen Poetry #2 |
Ignorance (better title suggs. welcome) |
Matchstick McGee Junior Member
since 2000-05-15
Posts 26Austin, Texas |
This is something kinda simple that I just whipped out a few minutes ago... it was actually going to be part of a longer poem but sort of stood out as "different" from the rest of it somehow. Please tell me what you think and any suggestions you have, since I may want to keep working on it. We build a house of our ignorance We furnish it with denial We paint the windows with carefree decadence To keep us from knowing the dangerous truth And we never go outside And we never open the shutters And we never see the prison we made For ourselves, in trying to shut the world out -Matchstick |
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Lucius Cade Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 235Saskatchewan |
That poses alot of interesting questions. I would like to see the rest of the longer poem you were making, or the rest to this poem. Lucidity is the answer to all problems |
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