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DragonFang
Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522
Missouri, USA

0 posted 2000-06-05 10:16 AM


First off I'd like to say, that I'm back, in whatever capacity I might manage to be back in (seeing as how I'm involved in quite a few projects). But I will start posting again =)=) I've missed you all.

Next, this poem has nothing to do with reality, just the boredom of spanish class.


Across the way,
I see and say,
An angel illumed from behind,
And in my mind,
Graceful to the eye,
Hurry for soon she shall fly.
Gone away she shall be,
Flown away, leaving me.
All alone I am now,
T live, I know not how.
For gone away, she's left me.

 "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \
I am lost in my own mind.

Some say the world will end in fire,
Some say in ice
From what I've tasted of desire,
I hold with those who favor fire.
But if it had to perish twice,
I think I know enough of hate
To say that for destruction ice
Is also great,
And would suffice.
-Robert Frost

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Lucius Cade
Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 235
Saskatchewan
1 posted 2000-06-05 10:31 AM


Welcome back dragon. Good poem, not bad for spanish class  

 Lucidity is the answer to all problems

angel6917
Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478
WI
2 posted 2000-06-05 02:08 PM


Cute poem, Sam... Shouldn't it be in espanol, seeing as you were in Spanish class??  Just wondering...
Love ya lots,
Kristi Lynn

emptyness
Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 95
mobile,Ala,USA
3 posted 2000-06-05 05:30 PM


yea   thoughts definatly wonder in spanish  nice to have you back

 "scribere iussit amor" love commanded me to write


DragonFang
Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522
Missouri, USA
4 posted 2000-06-05 07:29 PM


Lucius Cade
Heheh, thanks, but you should see the stuff that comes out of detention.

Kristi
ME?? SPEAK SPANISH??!?!?!? Ha, that's a joke. No, lol, I don't speak it well enough to write good poetry in spanish (tho it is easy to ryme).

emptyness
Dang right thoughts wander in spanish class (especialy to girls, there is a real cutie in my class). Anyway, thanks for the welcomes back.

Wait... I should be saying WAS, school is out now  


 "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \
I am lost in my own mind.

Some say the world will end in fire,
Some say in ice
From what I've tasted of desire,
I hold with those who favor fire.
But if it had to perish twice,
I think I know enough of hate
To say that for destruction ice
Is also great,
And would suffice.
-Robert Frost

StarPryncess17
Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932
Colorado
5 posted 2000-06-05 07:33 PM


WELCOME BACK!! I love your work!! =0) well, I agree! this isn't bad for spanish calss! I too understand the detriments of La clase de espanol! lol great job! can't wait to see some more! unlucky for me...school isn't out til wed.! =0( lol. nice writing! Love Always~*~Jessica Lynn~*~
DragonFang
Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522
Missouri, USA
6 posted 2000-06-05 09:47 PM


Jessica
?Tu hablas espanol tambien?
okay, that is about it for me, my mind has forgotten everthing already. You don't mind if I call you Jessica do you? Anyway, thanks for the the compliments on my poetry and for the cheerful welcome back.


 "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \
I am lost in my own mind.

Some say the world will end in fire,
Some say in ice
From what I've tasted of desire,
I hold with those who favor fire.
But if it had to perish twice,
I think I know enough of hate
To say that for destruction ice
Is also great,
And would suffice.
-Robert Frost

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