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CLBinLOVE
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since 2000-06-04
Posts 147
Hilton Head, SC, USA

0 posted 2000-06-04 10:37 PM


i wrote this poem as a christmas present to my girlfriend, i like to write her poems, because she doesnt trust me sometimes, she cant help it, thes not a trusting person, but i dont mind.  Anyway, i gave this to her as a small token of my love:
---------------------------------------------This is for you:


When I look at you I don’t see…
Your beautiful face when you look back at me.
What I see is a person that seems
To be perfect in every way.

But I cannot think of what to say
Or what words in what way
That can descried the joys of my day
When I get to see you.

I don’t know what it is that you do,
But I always want to see you soon.
And when I kiss you under the milky moon,
I want you to know that I love you.

I DO love you




 always follow your heart, never follow others unless it is truely where you want to go, and never give up a dream, maybe just set it aside...:)

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Isabelle
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since 1999-08-25
Posts 176
Indiana
1 posted 2000-06-04 10:45 PM


This poem melted my heart. Maybe one day i can find a guy that writes poems like this. Your girl is lucky. Well keep up the good work.

Isa  

 "Poetry is the music of the souls, and above all, of great and feeling souls."
~Voltaire~


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