Teen Poetry #2 |
im in love |
CLBinLOVE Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 147Hilton Head, SC, USA |
Hi, first, i guess i better introduce myself im 15, in 9th grade at Hilton Head High School ive always loved to write to get my feelings out and... i guess thats it, heres my poem, i wrote it one nite when i had gotten offline with my girlfriend and i couldnt wait to see her again: I feel that you Are the angel of my dreams And how you have changed my life You will never know, it seems Because there is always more More love than I can show Yet to you, well I think that you see Maybe, maybe, just how much you mean to me In the end, when this life is over And I have seen all that has been I will look for you, my angel To take me to heaven Every day I am with you And even some that I am not I think of how lucky I am And I dwell on that thought And so if you hear me sigh And are trying to figure out what’s wrong Just remember its not what’s wrong Its what’s right And when I think about you at night I think of all that is right And at the end of the night It is your picture that is my minds last sight I will always love you Never lose you Always need you And never forget you You are my heaven I love you |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
How ironic, I was just about to write a poem up here called "I'm In Love". It's not meant as any competition for you or anything, so I hope you don't mind...you should read mine too....although I honestly like yours better. keep it up. Jeremy Halstead |
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Isabelle Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 176Indiana |
This is so sweet. Again your girl is lucky. Hope to see more poems soon. And Welcome to Passions. Isa "Poetry is the music of the souls, and above all, of great and feeling souls." ~Voltaire~ |
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