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SwEEt&iNnOcCeNt
Junior Member
since 03-09-2000
Posts 45


0 posted 06-03-2000 01:56 AM       View Profile for SwEEt&iNnOcCeNt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SwEEt&iNnOcCeNt

not knowing how things would turn out,
i took a chance and introduced my self to you,
and you politely excepted my introduction..

years went by and we became closer friends,
i knew everything about you
and you knew everything about me...

you knew i would do anything i could for you
and i knew inturn you would do the same.

the day came when we went off to college
you got excepted to one
and me another

now were miles apart
and can't see each other as often as we want to.
but i know you'll always be their..

like you were before..
from now
until forever...

you'll always be my best friend
that i love and will hold
dearly to my heart...

~*~*~*~*~

LoL this one stinks!!!!!! sorry people haven't been here for along time.. been studding for my finals..  sorry i'll get better i promise(hope).. well i hope you respond... hi bec...!!!
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Jeremy Halstead
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since 06-01-2000
Posts 572
Morris, Ill. U.S.A


1 posted 06-04-2000 05:38 AM       View Profile for Jeremy Halstead   Email Jeremy Halstead   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeremy Halstead

You've got a nice grasp on your format and rythm and stuff.  Your meaning is clear too.  I like it.  I guess the only bit of constructive critisism I have for ya is that it seemed a little more like a letter than a peom... but some are meant to be like that, so I'll give ya some slack..hehehe j/k.  I wanna see some more.  Check out my stuff, would ya?

Jeremy D. Halstead

 
Isabel Galaxia
Senior Member
since 06-18-2000
Posts 757


2 posted 06-18-2000 02:07 PM       View Profile for Isabel Galaxia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Isabel Galaxia

Don't be so hard on yourself,that was good.  I can relate.  Keep writing!
-Bel
Artic Wind
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since 09-16-2007
Posts 8075
Realm of Supernatural


3 posted 11-15-2007 07:28 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND
 
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