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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
So many times that I sat and wondered. You left me distraught and completely blundered But worry about me, do not I’m sure you won’t, you just forgot; To smile when you passed me by, I now can’t look you in the eye I know feel used and look the same, Through others’ eyes I feel the shame. The looks by others, I could tell they knew Why it was that you left me cold and blue. My heart is now just an immense sea of tears As you sit and drink your beer I laugh at your ignorance and petty relationship Why is it that you can’t see she’s just a *****?!? She hated me since the beginning and set a goal A goal to ruin my life and put me in this whole Lonely without your voice and presence, But happy with myself and the decisions I’ve made And now I feel the essence The essence of how you truthfully don’t care My heart a raging fire With twisting and burning desire Desire to get back at you For all the pain you’ve put me thorough I now say goodbye Because all you do is lie So take your selfish undying soul And get out of my life You caused me too much strife! |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
Your poem tells the story really well. It goes indepth into different parts of the theme and that makes it better. Keep it up. Jeremy |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
well, this one is also about my dad. I suppose there is a lot in my heart having to do with my dad. many mixed feelings towards him. but no matter what, I'll always love him-Because he is my dad! thanks for reading my poems! Love you All!! |
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