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JennyeMeshan
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since 02-15-2000
Posts 104
Cecil, Wisconsin USA


0 posted 06-02-2000 03:21 AM       View Profile for JennyeMeshan   Email JennyeMeshan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for JennyeMeshan

Every night I come online,
To see if you're doing fine,
I met you not too long ago,
Closer and closer we do grow,
I found out that you live so close,
Always the one I wanna see the most,
Could something really happen here?,
But trusting you is my biggest fear,
You make me smile on a gloomy day,
Always know the right thing to say,
Will we ever meet sometime?,
Go for dinner and drink some wine,
Will you make me smile like before?,
And hopefully grow into something more?,
Or will you never be up to it,
I will be neverous I have to admit,
I wait for this day I wait for the nite,
Hopefully things will turn out alright.
-JennyeMeshan

This poem is about a guy I met online and he is a really great guy. He makes me smile on days when I'm hurting. I want to meet him so bad but I don't know if I know him well enough. We tell each other everything and I do the same. He helps me feel better about my life and he supports everything I do. If he feels it's bad he will object. He says he wants to meet me sometime and get together. It was a shock and so I wrote about it. Thankx for reading!!  




 "If thou can wait then thou shall stay"
-Destiny's Child

© Copyright 2000 Jennifer Trejo - All Rights Reserved
DragonFang
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since 03-09-2000
Posts 525
Missouri, USA


1 posted 06-02-2000 09:47 AM       View Profile for DragonFang   Email DragonFang   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DragonFang's Home Page   View IP for DragonFang

ahhh, very beautiful poem. It is very nearly the same as it was when I first met Jen, we talked on the phone a whole lot, then we decided to meet at the park one friday afternoon, and now   well, let us just say that sometimes, taking a step off into the unknown is well worth the risk. I'm glad you've found someone to share your poblems with.

 "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \
I am lost in my own mind.

Some say the world will end in fire,
Some say in ice
From what I've tasted of desire,
I hold with those who favor fire.
But if it had to perish twice,
I think I know enough of hate
To say that for destruction ice
Is also great,
And would suffice.
-Robert Frost
jenleslie
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since 05-26-2000
Posts 16
USA


2 posted 06-02-2000 05:07 PM       View Profile for jenleslie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jenleslie

it's very cool that you trust him enough to think about meeting him. wheneveri meet someone online i never feel the trust. go with it. it was an awesome poem too.  

 A broken bone can heal, but the wound a word opens can fester forever.
~Jessamyn West
JennyeMeshan
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since 02-15-2000
Posts 104
Cecil, Wisconsin USA


3 posted 06-03-2000 02:00 PM       View Profile for JennyeMeshan   Email JennyeMeshan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JennyeMeshan

Thankx for your very nice replies to my poem. I might meet him yet...but I have to wait and see what happens.

JennyeMeshan  

 "If thou can wait then thou shall stay"
-Destiny's Child

Jeremy Halstead
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since 06-01-2000
Posts 572
Morris, Ill. U.S.A


4 posted 06-04-2000 04:56 PM       View Profile for Jeremy Halstead   Email Jeremy Halstead   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeremy Halstead

Hey, don't feel alone here...I have an on-line thing giong too.  I'm going to meet her in August (11 hours away!!)  She's actually planning on moving here if things stay the same or progress.  I'ts really kewl and I'm happy for you.  Oh, yeah..Your poem had kind of that simple "prayer at nigth" kind of vibe in it like a song called "Dear Diary".   good job.

Jeremy D. Halstead

 
nikki813
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since 04-29-2000
Posts 15
PA, USA


5 posted 06-04-2000 06:12 PM       View Profile for nikki813   Email nikki813   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nikki813

Good Poem. I wish you the best of luck, but be careful!
*Nikki*
Isabelle
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since 08-25-99
Posts 176
Indiana


6 posted 06-05-2000 12:17 AM       View Profile for Isabelle   Email Isabelle   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Isabelle

Beautifully written. I do know how you feel. I have a guy on the internet that i've been talking to for about a year now i want to meet him so bad but he lives in Pennsylvania while i'm here in Indiana. If i were u i'd go for it...just take precaution k. GOOD LUCK!

Jeanna  
CLBinLOVE
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since 06-04-2000
Posts 147
Hilton Head, SC, USA


7 posted 06-05-2000 11:55 AM       View Profile for CLBinLOVE   Email CLBinLOVE   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CLBinLOVE

well, as alot of other people who have replied to this site, i have a story that fits this poem also...me and my girlfriend met at a 3 week summer program over the summer, we became friends, and then when the 3 weeks were over we exchanged emails since she lived about 1 hour away.   From july til december we talked daily, first through email, then through Instant Messanger, and occaonsionally over the phone.  In december i asked her out, and i think it was the best decision of my life.  
stick with your feeling, go with them, and if you feel that you can trust him enough to tell him you secrets, then you should trust him enough to see him

 always follow your heart, never follow others unless it is truely where you want to go, and never give up a dream, maybe just set it aside...:)
JennyeMeshan
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since 02-15-2000
Posts 104
Cecil, Wisconsin USA


8 posted 06-06-2000 04:43 PM       View Profile for JennyeMeshan   Email JennyeMeshan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JennyeMeshan

thankx for replying. Sadly he hasn't answered my e-mails in a while and I"m a little worried but I haven't lost hope just yet. Hopefully he's just busy with work or something. hehe but things have gotten better since Nate left my life.   bye all and thankx for reading!
-JennyeMeshan  


 "If thou can wait then thou shall stay"
-Destiny's Child

amazon_lover
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since 04-09-2000
Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland


9 posted 06-06-2000 04:50 PM       View Profile for amazon_lover   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amazon_lover

Hi Jenn
It was very interesting. TO meet people online is terrific. YOu can explore more about them then we can do personally ofcourse if they are true.

Sincerely
A_L
JennyeMeshan
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since 02-15-2000
Posts 104
Cecil, Wisconsin USA


10 posted 06-08-2000 07:41 AM       View Profile for JennyeMeshan   Email JennyeMeshan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JennyeMeshan

hi and thankx again for replying. I met him and he was great. I can't believe how well we hit it off. He was a really nice guy. THankx for the confidence and help.
lataz,
JennyeMeshan

 "If thou can wait then thou shall stay"
-Destiny's Child

Novacaine For The Soul
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since 05-26-2000
Posts 129
New Orleans


11 posted 06-09-2000 10:41 PM       View Profile for Novacaine For The Soul   Email Novacaine For The Soul   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Novacaine For The Soul

dear jennye:
     though i'm not much for "love" poetry and your form could use some work, i felt a need to respond to this in order to encourage you and wish you the best in your relationship... my significant other (of a year and a half now) and i met online and have maintained a loving and caring relationship over the 1,500 some-odd miles between us... i hope this chap is as wonderful as you seem to think he is... best of luck to the both of you...

sincerely,
a sad tomato

 you're such a beautiful freak... i wish there were more just like you...
Artic Wind
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since 09-16-2007
Posts 8075
Realm of Supernatural


12 posted 11-15-2007 07:08 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND
 
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