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To Dance

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Jeremy Halstead
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since 06-01-2000
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Morris, Ill. U.S.A


0 posted 06-01-2000 01:54 AM       View Profile for Jeremy Halstead   Email Jeremy Halstead   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Jeremy Halstead

To Dance

Her feet are dazzling upon the floor
that I now envy such.
In quickness, movement coordinates art
in a course that says so much.
Along a pattern insipred by love,
she jerks to form the way
that draws a picture displaying truly
what life could be someday.
Feeling taken by cupids touch,
I try to immitate chance.
Wanting only to create true love,
I try to truly dance.

-Jeremy D. Halstead


 
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Crystalina123
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since 01-31-2000
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1 posted 06-01-2000 10:31 AM       View Profile for Crystalina123   Email Crystalina123   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Crystalina123

Jeremy,
I like this poem. I get the impression that it can be perceived on many levels. That type of poem is usually the best kind. Nice work.

Crystal

 "The worst of what people do to one another is deceive.
Because when you love someone you control their version
of reality. If you lie to them that's like making them
autistic so that what they believe is reality is in fact,
not their true situation at all."

It's not the angry words that break the heart, it's the silence.

Someone said that true love is like a ghost -- often spoke of but never seen.
I've seen both and yet in my darkest hours, tend to believe that neither exits.
Kandi
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since 06-14-2000
Posts 359
North of Hell


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Hey jeremy  
I honestly loved this poem...no surprise, I love everything u write.  The more I read your work, the more I get the feeling that you have a very unique and insightful way of looking at practically everything in life - you'll go far with that kind of perspective my friend.
Much love
Kandi


 ~*All that I have found in reason is reason just to not believe *~

~*Things you see the way you see them will never be seen again*~
TAP2
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since 06-29-2000
Posts 211
Morris, Il USA


3 posted 07-09-2000 11:41 AM       View Profile for TAP2   Email TAP2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit TAP2's Home Page   View IP for TAP2

Went searching for this one to. We're all dancers in this great ballroom. Enjoy your dance.

"I could have missed the pain
But I'd of had to miss the dance."
-Garth Brooks

Thomas
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Realm of Supernatural


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Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND
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