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Blondie69
Junior Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 13


0 posted 2000-05-31 11:54 PM


To myself, am I being true?
Am I really ready to devote myself to you?
Were only so young for such a short time
And my life won't always be, just a one-way-line.

My soul, I'm only beginning to discover
Will you keep me safe, so I'll never suffer?
you can't say "yes" without knowing the future
But myself, I will try to reassure

Right now, your my heart, my soul, my universe
But your only the beginning of my love, my first
If this is love and if it is not, I will pass onto other what you have taught
what we have together, could never be bought

So we will live now, day by day
together or not, friends we'll stay
The future will change and so will we
for life is a never ending mystery

© Copyright 2000 Jessica - All Rights Reserved
mickel2995
Junior Member
since 2000-05-24
Posts 48

1 posted 2000-06-01 12:53 PM


I THINK THAT TOTALLY DESCRIBES GETTING INVOLVED IN RELATIONSHIPS AND THE RISKS OR LOSSES YOU MUST BE READY TO MAKE OR TAKE, I LOVE IT!!  GREAT JOB!


 

Jeremy Halstead
Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A
2 posted 2000-06-01 02:08 AM


Well, I don't know how old you are or how much experience in life you have, but it really seems to me that you really have a good head on your shoulders.  I'm gonna be 20 in less than a month and I've been through every kind of emotion and experience there is to venture through.  Learning to question love and knowing to wait until the right time to devote yourself to it is a very mature thing to do and I'm glad to have read such a nicely writen piece of that kind of maturity

Jeremy

Matchstick McGee
Junior Member
since 2000-05-15
Posts 26
Austin, Texas
3 posted 2000-06-01 02:50 PM


It can be so easy to think you're in love but really just be "in love with being in love" as they say. Well done.
amazon_lover
Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland
4 posted 2000-06-02 04:24 PM


Hi Blondie
That's a question which doesn't have an answer. We fall with person thinking that he/she is the one for us but sometime later it turns out to be sour and heart wrenching. It will be easy if we know prior to the start of a relationship that they are the one for us. I guess if its possible we can avoid so many heartbreaks and philanderers creeping  up. First be a friend and understand that person. One can never force the other and try to mould a person to his desires. Its a decision that must be made by an individual and it needs a lot of thinking.

Sincerely
A_L

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