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Secsyy lil angel
Junior Member
since 2000-05-30
Posts 36
Portland Oregon, USA

0 posted 2000-05-31 06:59 PM


Today I realized something....
I realized that my friends will not be around forever
That we will not always be togather
That the time we have is short
And there are so many feelings still to sort
But somehow, I will make it
And my heart will be able to take it.

Today I realized something....
I realized that relationships dont last forever
That me and him will not always be togather
That the time we have is short
And there are so many feelings still to sort
But somehow, I will make it
And my heart will be able to take it.

Today I realized something....
I realized that memories do last forever
That my memories and I will always be togather
That the time we have is long
And forever they stay strong
And now I know that I can make it
And I have proven that my heart can take it.




 ~*Love exists only in the hearts of those who choose to acknowledge its existence...*~

*~To the world you may be one person, but to one person you may be the world.~*

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Nutmeg1093
New Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 4
Cloquet, MN
1 posted 2000-06-01 02:29 PM


I think that a lot of people can really relate to this. We have a lot of things in life that eventually fade away, but we can always have the memories of them.  I like the way that you wrote this poem.  Nice job!
Isabelle
Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 176
Indiana
2 posted 2000-06-02 12:18 PM


Very nicely written. It's good that you have realized these things some people don't. I've got to admit sometimes i feel i won't make it, but in the end i know i will. Anyhow keep up the work.

Isa

 "Poetry is the music of the souls, and above all, of great and feeling souls."
~Voltaire~


amazon_lover
Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland
3 posted 2000-06-02 04:13 PM


Hi Seccssy..
Passing youth, faded deisres,fleeting emotions,first friendship, first kiss,hug,love etc are all wonderful memmories which cannot be erased. Hold on to your memmories,dreams and everything which made you a good person in life.

Sincerely
A_L

jenleslie
Junior Member
since 2000-05-26
Posts 16
USA
4 posted 2000-06-02 05:00 PM


you described how every person most likely feels about relationships and memmories at one time or another. i liked it a lot.

 A broken bone can heal, but the wound a word opens can fester forever.
~Jessamyn West

miriam
Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 323
glendale,ca.
5 posted 2000-06-02 10:20 PM


Bravo! Bravo! no one could've said it better sweetie.

  miriam coronado



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