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emma New Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 8 |
Do we really know what love is Is it passion? Is it friendship? Is it an attraction? All we really know is that love is love. My definition of love is not just a word but a person, a friend, someone who can grow old with you and someone that will hold you in there arms, but even though we think love is perfect... Its not It hurts people It makes them cry It even ruins lives I hope you realize that love is not perfect and that you'll look at love in a different way |
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brendon2k Junior Member
since 2000-05-11
Posts 38none |
Great poem, and holds alot of truth. I liked very much how you put it together. Keep it up. |
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Secsyy lil angel Junior Member
since 2000-05-30
Posts 36Portland Oregon, USA |
I really like this poem, it is so~o true!!! I think you put into words what a lot of people cant, and also what many dont realize, that no matter what we do, in the end or somewhere along the way we do get hurt. Love hurts, but it also heals. Keep writing!! P.S. Look at my poems sometime  ~*Love exists only in the hearts of those who choose to acknowledge its existence...*~ *~To the world you may be one person, but to one person you may be the world.~* |
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LIL' Lou Junior Member
since 2000-06-02
Posts 29OKlahoma |
WOW! this is really deep! keep it up!!! Love is like a rainbow, Each color has a differnt meaning. Lauren Lou |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
I congratulate you on your new (or old, I don't know) found secret! Love does hurt! There's no way around it. But right about now I'll tell you this much, it also has a lot of power to heal you. Don't give up on love! Only on your darkest night of despair will you find it ni yourself to feel love, to create love, to be love. Best of luck-you'll find the right person...some day! =0) Great Writing though! keep it up!! Love Always~Jessica Lynn~ |
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hoppy Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 271 |
pretty good poem, but i must disagree yet again, ever notice i disagree alot. Anyway, I think i might disagree in verse Love is perfect, Love is kind, Staring us in the face But we're too blind. We say love hurt us We say it is too deep But this pain that hurts Is not love so do not weep The pain that fills your heart The one that brings tears This my friend is the absense of love You'll learn this in your years When your down and crying Cursing love and sending it on it's way Please remember it is not love that hurts It only hurts because the love went away <!signature--> <font face="Arial, Verdana" size="1" color="#000080"> There's a fine line between genius and insanity. I have erased this line. -- Oscar Levant "Death is not the greatest loss in life. The greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live."</font> [This message has been edited by hoppy (edited 06-05-2000).] |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
I have to agree with the last comment that love is not what hurts, but the loss of it. Love has many forms and is entirely unconditional and unselfish...that to me is perfection. To love is to simply care, without reason or reward...or even love in return. I'm not trying to contradict...you did an excellent job and I do comend you because you expressed the point that although love is a mystery, we do know that it never comes without the chance of losing it. Jeremy Halstead |
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