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Secsyy lil angel
Junior Member

since 2000-05-30

Posts 36
Portland Oregon, USA

0 posted 2000-05-30 07:09 PM

Lost Love

We thought what we had was true love
You told me you loved me and I told you I loved you too
But in the end it didnt work out
We both realized that maybe our love wasnt so true

But here I am today thinking about the past
Wishing upon the stars that you could be with me
Every night I dream of when I will be close to you again
And every day I remember that it's you who I may never see

The endless feeling of loneliness has faded but not yet gone
I talk to you every now and then but it just isnt the same
I know that you still care about me and I care about you
But why does love have to be such a hurtful game?

I miss you so much that it hurts me inside
Whenever I hear your name I feel as though I could cry
Do you feel the same way as I do
Or am I lost in a big empty lie?

The hurt I feel will never completly go away
And this love for you will stay forever
I just want you to know how much I care
And hope that someday we will again be togather

LyricFetish
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 528
North Carolina

1 posted 2000-05-30 08:08 PM

Powerful poem here. Great job of expressing your emotions. Never give up hope.......to use an old cliche. I love this.

*~Meredith~*

It's another world
But it's something more than ordinary
Such a lovely day
And it's nothing more than ordinary living
That you're living
- Lit

brendon2k
Junior Member

since 2000-05-11

Posts 38
none

2 posted 2000-05-31 11:33 AM

Great poem! i loved the lines:
"I miss you so much that it hurts me inside
Whenever I hear your name I feel as though I could cry"
a very well written and very emotions/powerful poem. Very well put together.

StarPryncess17
Senior Member

since 2000-05-31

Posts 932
Colorado

3 posted 2000-06-01 06:39 PM

Love the poem!! I can definately relate! I wish the love of my life would realize how much I really do love him and would treat me like a person and be with me! I love the way you worded it, something I've tried for a very long time but could never find the courage to write it all out and then give it to him. ~*~Jessica~*~

Jeffyf
Junior Member

since 2000-05-28

Posts 49
Muncie, IN

4 posted 2000-06-02 01:09 AM

Beautiful poem, angel. It reminds me of the pain I have felt all too often. I express my loss in the dark passions forum instead, though. Regardless of where you say it, it still hurts just as much to get it out. Things will get better, believe me. You may not have that same rose of love, but another flower will fill your view, and make you happy as you once were.
Jeffy

amazon_lover
Member

since 2000-04-09

Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland

5 posted 2000-06-02 03:49 PM

Hi Secssy..
Its true love is a hurtful game and its a journey of dips and mounds. Take a firm decision that's good for you.

Sincerely
A_L

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