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Love is Sick and Life is Short
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Love is Sick and Life is Short |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
<div align="Center"><font face="Comic Sans MS, Arial, Verdana" color="#000080" size="2"> Love is Sick and Life is Short Love is sick, and I feel its you I never asked, but knew it anyway Life is short, I and know its true All these things aren’t just in lieu Life is what you choose Everyday for what you lose, Love is tragic, why can’t you see Its anything but magic Life is sad, don’t you know by now? Tragedies around drive me mad Life is uncertain, always running in circles You can never tell when it’s curtains Love is like water, and nothing’s for real Life is a strange mixture, somehow that congeals </font></div><!signature--> <font face="Arial, Verdana" size="1" color="#000080"> ---------------------- Spreading insanity, one post at a time</font> [This message has been edited by Deranger (edited 05-29-2000).] |
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swan Member
since 1999-07-19
Posts 58california, usa |
nice |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is a good poem, and we all feel like this sometimes. You have to remember the good things about life and love, because the good outweighs the bad, easily. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
You took the words right out of my mouth. All fellow pessimists say right on! (just joking, ummmm, whatever) Good poem, be real! *~Meredith~* It's another world But it's something more than ordinary Such a lovely day And it's nothing more than ordinary living That you're living - Lit |
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Vball Chickie1624 Member
since 2000-05-14
Posts 116New York |
Hi! Great poem...I love it...keep writing. - luv ya - Danielle  "Dream what you want to dream; go where you want to go; be what you want to be, because you have only one life and one chance to do all the things you want to do." "The role of a writer is not to say what we can all say, but what we are unable to say." - Anais Nin "Follow your own heart, not others." |
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brendon2k Junior Member
since 2000-05-11
Posts 38none |
Great Poem! I love how it all flows together. Keep it up. |
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Nutmeg1093 New Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 4Cloquet, MN |
Hey!! Keep the chin up! I guess we can all feel this way sometimes, but just remember that it all gets good with time! I promise!! : ) Nice writing. It all goes together very nicely. |
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jenleslie Junior Member
since 2000-05-26
Posts 16USA |
good poem. everyone feels that way at one time or another. it all works out in the end though. keep up the writing. A broken bone can heal, but the wound a word opens can fester forever. ~Jessamyn West |
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