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NaTaLy
Junior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 43
brooklyn,ny,usa

0 posted 2000-05-28 01:41 AM


the sky is bright pink
and you sit there across me
on a park bench
feeding the pigions
watchin the world go by.
you catch me stare
and you smile
but i stare away
lookin at the roller bladers go by.
i get up without sayin a word,
and as im about 2 leave
we stare into eachothers eyes
for an eternal second
ill never forget your face
and i ponder this while walking back to my little apartment on the east side.

 nat<~~~~funny girl



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Lucius Cade
Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 235
Saskatchewan
1 posted 2000-05-28 02:16 AM


Wow, your imagery was very good. I could just picture the sky, the pigeons and the roller bladers. I loved the poem.

 Lucidity is the answer to all problems

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