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Allysa
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0 posted 05-25-2000 08:18 AM       View Profile for Allysa   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Allysa

Will you cry at my funeral?
As they lower me to the ground?
Will you find my gold id bracelet?
It's in the lost and found.
Will you promise to never forget,
the way it used to be?
And will you never let him,
forget what he did to me?
Will you always remember,
all the good times we had?
And remember I am with you,
whenever you are sad.
Will you please remember,
to never let me go?
And always remember to think of me,
whenever it may snow.
Please try to remember,
and try hard to forget
Will you please let me know,
if I ever was a regret?
And no matter what,
don't ever let go./
Though we may be apart,
I'll see you soon, you know.
Just try hard to remember,
I am never coming home.
And please remember you'll see me.
Just remember you're not alone.


 Loves may seem forgotten, but the true will once shine through.
© Copyright 2000 Allysa - All Rights Reserved
Ben Singleton
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1 posted 05-25-2000 05:24 PM       View Profile for Ben Singleton   Email Ben Singleton   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ben Singleton

Hey, Tough Love.I've been there many a time. But you will pull through coz your poem felt true and you sound like a fighter!
brendon2k
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2 posted 05-31-2000 11:27 AM       View Profile for brendon2k   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brendon2k

Wonderful poem, and i can totaly relate to the feeling of losing someone. It flows perfectly together. Very deep and sad. Over i loved the poem. keep it up.
emma
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3 posted 05-31-2000 02:07 PM       View Profile for emma   Email emma   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for emma

hey that was a wonderful poem!  you have a beautiful gift!  never stop!
~*Emma*~

 
jenleslie
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4 posted 05-31-2000 03:18 PM       View Profile for jenleslie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jenleslie

awesome poem. it totally describes how it feels to lose someone you cared for a lot.
Allysa
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5 posted 11-08-2000 03:45 PM       View Profile for Allysa   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Allysa

thanks all. just wanted to add this to my library

Morning rain fell on my window, and I can't see at all. Even if I could it would all be gray, put your picture on my wall, it reminds me that it's not
quietlydying
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6 posted 11-01-2002 03:29 AM       View Profile for quietlydying   Email quietlydying   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for quietlydying

wow, there were some very strong lines in this piece.

you've come a long way, girl.

:>

good write.

/jen/

what if they gave a war, and nobody came...

Artic Wind
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7 posted 11-15-2007 07:47 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND
 
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