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hoppy
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since 2000-01-27
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0 posted 2000-05-24 12:02 PM


look at you
burning
for him

shall
the fire
take
us both?


---Written by:Hoppy


5-29-00  



 There's a fine line between genius and insanity. I have erased this line.
-- Oscar Levant

Don't worry about people stealing your ideas. If your ideas are any good, you'll have to ram them down people's throats.
-- Howard Aiken


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Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
1 posted 2000-05-25 01:21 AM


Short but very profound...this is very good hoppy!  
Salooma
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since 2000-01-28
Posts 781

2 posted 2000-05-25 04:50 PM


Hoppy....I always enjoyed your short, simple poetry and the meaning behind thw words. Another grand piece. Thanks for sharing it.

Salma

 "Not all the answers lie within your realm or mine, they lie within the borders."

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