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My Life (With or without you)
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My Life (With or without you) |
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Emily Williams New Member
since 2000-05-23
Posts 5 |
My Life By: Emily Williams My life before you Yes I had one. Before you life was simple Before you I had a list of three things that I would never put up with in a relationship: one cheating, two lying, and three insults to my intelligence, beauty, or integrity. Before you I didn't believe in love Before you love never had me included in it Before you love was something everyone else got them selves into and would do anything and everything to prevent myself from falling into that trap. Before you I avoided love like the Plague. Before you my life was complete. My life while you're in it. Yes I have one. While you're in my life, life is not simple, and as long as we are together it will not be. While we are together I trusted you for seven days away. In these seven days you: one cheated, two lied, and three insulted my intelligence, beauty, and integrity. While we are together I fell in love. While we were together love finally included me in it. While we are together love was something I got my self into and regret it almost every Day. If I didn't love you so much I would never hurt this much. While we were together I felt the need to run no more, love found me no matter how well I hid. While we were together my life was complete. My life after you Yes I have one. After you life was simple again. After you I had a list of three things that I would never put up with in a relationship: one cheating, two lying, and three insults to my intelligence, beauty, or integrity. After you I didn't believe in love After you love never had me included in it After you love was something everyone else got them selves into and would do anything and everything to prevent myself from falling into that trap. After you I avoided love like the Plague. After you my life was complete. |
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Lucius Cade Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 235Saskatchewan |
That is very interesting how you set that up, I like it. But I think if you have faith in love it will come around for you, great poem, and welcome to passions. Lucidity is the answer to all problems |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! I look forward to reading more from you...please check your email for a special welcome..  |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
Welcome to Passion!!! Nice style chica, ya love feels like a trap every once and again. But so's life and anything else worth it...called it the greatest irony. So maybe love is a nasty at this time, but teens are easily confused (myself very included). So at least you found a great place to vent...Welcome again. DERANGER (AH HELP, MY CAPSLOCK IS STUCK!!!) ---------------------- Spreading insanity, one post at a time |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
Wow...Welcome to Passions! This is a very nice first post and a very interesting format. I love how it all matches up with the different stages in your life. Really nice  Salma "Not all the answers lie within your realm or mine, they lie within the borders." |
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