Teen Poetry #2 |
Dreamer |
the dark angel Junior Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 37 |
If dreams weren't dreams and dreams came true then I wouldn't be stuck here I'd be there with you. But no matter however far we are apart. Don't ever fear you are always in my heart |
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Haroon New Member
since 2000-05-23
Posts 7 |
short but sweet. good work |
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aussie_princesss Junior Member
since 2000-05-17
Posts 15Australia |
Nice poem. This poem applies to me in some ways. Rhiannon |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Ah, I can relate to this very <b>VERY</b> well. Great job. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Ibolele, my friend....so don't give up on that dream....either it will come true or something more beautiful beyond your wildest dreams will come true. Lovely lil poem. Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Matchstick McGee Junior Member
since 2000-05-15
Posts 26Austin, Texas |
I love a well written short poem. It's so easy to carry around with you in your heart. Very well done. -Matchstick |
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