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Jasmine
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since 2000-02-15
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0 posted 2000-05-22 09:24 PM



shocking
vibrant blue
lonely strands
fall into your eyes

you speak
unleashing a string of words
filled with passion
intelligence
i'm mesmerized

blue
a word so defining
few can see past it
i wish they could

blue
i don't notice
don't see blue hair
i see the boy i love

           *Jasmine*



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Haroon
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since 2000-05-23
Posts 7

1 posted 2000-05-23 02:30 PM


Blue as the sky,
Blue as the sea.
Blue as you,
Blue as me.

I loved the poem Yasmine.

ESP
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Posts 2556
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2 posted 2000-05-23 03:07 PM


Love is blind....lovely little poem here, Jasmine!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


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3 posted 2000-05-23 09:23 PM


<b><font color="robineggblue">Jasmine~
How adorable ...
you had me going ...
love the -

'vibrant blue
lonely strands
fall into your eyes'

How wonderful to know that love
doesn't see the outside ...
but looks within.
~*Marge*~</b></font color>


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Lucius Cade
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since 2000-03-23
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4 posted 2000-05-23 11:55 PM


This boy of yours sure likes to dye his hair hey? hehe. Purple, blue, I cant wait to hear about the next one. Great poem.

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