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aussie_princesss
Junior Member
since 2000-05-17
Posts 15
Australia

0 posted 2000-05-22 12:41 PM


I looked at you, you looked at me
My love for you was destined to be
From the first time, I held you in my arms
I knew, I would never do you no harm
I touched your hair and your face
And held you in my warm embrace
As time moved on we were having fun
I made a promise to you, you would always be the one
We would walk in the park, your hand in mine
From the time we met, my love for you did shine
Even though we spend time apart
You will always have a place in my heart
Four years later, your still my sweetheart
Nathan my brother, you will always be in my heart

Happy 4th Birthday
Nathan


© Copyright 2000 Rhiannon Ritorto - All Rights Reserved
Yu Lan
Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462
New Zealand
1 posted 2000-05-22 12:48 PM


Wow, hehe.. u got me with that one. ^_^ I am sure your brother will love it.. something special, that's for sure. ^_^ U know, I really thought it was going to be another soppy love poem, written for some guy, who breaks your heart the next day.. *_^ u certainly are a talented writer!! ^_^

my compliments to your talent..
Lynne

Danny Holloway
Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
2 posted 2000-05-22 11:37 AM


This poem was so sweet and loving! Nathan is lucky to have a sister that cares so much!
~~nice writing~~


 A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives.


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