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Long Distance Love |
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jackailius New Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 1 |
I love you so much I hate being away and feeling alone I always want to talk to you But I'm so bad on the phone I miss the taste of your lips I long for your sweet smile I yearn for your embrace, The way you move, your sweet style I can't wait till once again We can be together For these feelings I have For you there is no measure I hope what they say is true About the time we are apart They say it will help us Become fonder in the heart I lye awake in my bed In the middle of the night Anticipating the time when Once again I can hold you tight My tears of longing for you I Find harder and harder to fight When we are alone together I want to wrap you in my love I feel you complete me You set me free like a dove |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
nice! sweet words.. for a sweet person? ^_^ well written.. Lynne |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
Wow, i can relate dude... About a year ago (god, has it really been that long?) i move to Vancouver and left behind a lovely, faithful, sexy, perfect girlfriend... I totally understand where your comming from my friend... I'd like to tell you it gets better, but the truth is, it dont, only worse...sorry cuz. Faithful she was, but patience she wasn't, she left me for my best friend...do i really blame her...not really, she's happy, he's happy...but will i ever forgive him, not on your life!!! Oh hell, there i go again, always the pesimist...Well, great poem, it really hit close to home, latter cuz |
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Dina Junior Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 10 |
I really enjoyed this poem. It was well written. I know how hard long distant relationships work but I know that you can get through it. So I think you should turn your  upside down  Try to keep in touch and if it doesn't work don't worry beacuse, love will always be in the air. Keep the poems comingDina |
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Blondie69 Junior Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 13 |
that was a realyl good poem. and i can relate to how you feel. every year i go away for a month and i have to leave my bf here, and the feeling sux. |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
I haven't been in love so I can't say "I can relate". Anyway, why is everyone so dependant on their boyfriends/girlfriends? What happened to interdependance? Heck, what I am saying...I don't even know what you are going through. Anyway, whatever, I love the poem! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." [This message has been edited by ESP (edited 05-24-2000).] |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family....you've expressed the age old truth here..it's painful to be apart from someone you love... please check your email!!  |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
Welcoeme to Passions....this poem is very good I must tell you. It's really sweet to hear of this kind of love. I can't relate either, but if you can feel that way about someone, it must be true love. good luck with that! Salma "Not all the answers lie within your realm or mine, they lie within the borders." |
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