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Reflections(Replies needed!!)

heatherbear
Junior Member

since 2000-04-30

Posts 48

0 posted 2000-05-21 06:22 PM

I look into the mirror,
what is it that I see?
So many things bundled into one,
and that's what makes me, me!

There's some things,
I just can't understand.
But then there's so many,
That I can.

I have two hands I use to touch,
And a heart I use to love.
Two eyes made out of motivation and trust,
and a spirit like a dove.

Two ears I use to listen,
to anything they will.
And a happiness that surrounds me,
no matter how I feel.

Sometimes there is a sadness,
that's very rarely here.
And sometimes there is a hurt,
that might bring a tear.

Sometimes I can't find courage,
bravery or skill.
But that will never stop me,
I'll keep going, I will!

But most of all,
I see me.
The same person,
that I am so happy to be!

Never give up on yourself,
no matter how bad it feels.
We all pull through it some time,
and that is a deal!!

The moral of this poem~don't give up ever. Go stand in front of a mirror and point out all the good things about you. I guarantee you'll feel better. Go out and help someone that might have it a little worse than you~they probably feel the same!!

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[This message has been edited by heatherbear (edited 05-21-2000).]

Yu Lan
Senior Member

since 2000-04-13

Posts 1462
New Zealand

1 posted 2000-05-22 01:15 AM

nice... ^_^

well done heatherbear, another great work of art.. ^_^

Lynne

Danny Holloway
Member Elite

since 2000-01-15

Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK

2 posted 2000-05-22 11:48 AM

Very nice poem....i like the message and the rhyme. It's nice to see an uplifting poem in this Forum.
~~well written i feel~~

A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives.

Dina
Junior Member

since 2000-05-20

Posts 10

3 posted 2000-05-22 06:54 PM

I need to thank you. This poem has helped me a lot. Nicely written and please keep up the good work I really enjoy it.

Dina

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