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pharon
Member
since 1999-11-13
Posts 251
alabama

0 posted 2000-05-20 07:24 PM


it seems that everything i do or say
is tearing up my life.
slowling knocking down the walls that
tried to keep me safe.
i don't know what is, causing this
to happen to me now.
i'm not too sure of the reason
i don't want to go on.
it seems as though everything
near to me is fading.
all my dreams and aspirations
are slowly slipping away
and i know that i have no one
to blame but me


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Yu Lan
Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462
New Zealand
1 posted 2000-05-20 07:29 PM


Ohh, this is such a depressed poem, cheer up pharon.. everyone here in these forums is here for you... yueah, I know exactly how u feel.. not an unfamiliar feeling for me either.. if u ever want to talk, I'd be happy to..
I am not sure about a title.. sorry, I am hopeless with titles. hehe..

nice writing..
Lynne

[This message has been edited by Yu Lan (edited 05-20-2000).]

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