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KiLeZ
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since 2000-05-20
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0 posted 2000-05-20 06:49 PM


I'm not supposed to feel for you,
I'm not supposed to care,
I'm not supposed to live my life wishing you were there,
I'm not supposed to wonder where you are or what you do,
I'm sorry I can't help myself,
I'm in love with you.

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Yu Lan
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since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462
New Zealand
1 posted 2000-05-20 07:34 PM


touching writing.. strong feelings, and a shame, that it had to be an "I'm not supposed to".. a heartfelt poem.. loved to read it. looking forward to reading more of your poetry.. ^_^
title? what's that?? hehe, sorry, i'm not much help in that area.. *_^

Lynne

[This message has been edited by Yu Lan (edited 05-20-2000).]

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