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Dina
Junior Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 10


0 posted 2000-05-20 03:37 PM


                 Forever Friends

A friend is someone who is always there,
Someone to cry and laugh with,
And even share clothes to wear.

A friend is always there with open arms and ears.
To listen to your problems
And wipe away your tears.

During the rough friendship battles,
Seems like the friendship is at end
But it is only the beginning because,
We will always be forever friends.

By: Dina Marsico


 

© Copyright 2000 Dina - All Rights Reserved
Yu Lan
Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462
New Zealand
1 posted 2000-05-20 07:46 PM


aaw that's beautiful.. I totally agree.. friendship IS forever.. always..
nicely said.. great first post.. I will watch for more of yours. *_^

Lynne

ESP
Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
2 posted 2000-05-21 02:51 PM


Welcome to Passions, Dina!! Great to have you with us! And your poem? Personally, I think you describe that wonderful creation, friendship, very sweetly! Lovely work....keep posting.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

Lonelypoet
Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 123
Conklin,NY,USA
3 posted 2000-05-21 04:12 PM


Dear Dina,
I totally agree with this poem. A great overall poem!

Matchstick McGee
Junior Member
since 2000-05-15
Posts 26
Austin, Texas
4 posted 2000-05-21 05:34 PM


Reminds me of some of my best friends and memories of when we came through hard times to emerge happier and closer in the end.

      -Matchstick

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