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Why did I fall?
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Why did I fall? |
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Jessica182 Junior Member
since 2000-03-20
Posts 15 |
The way I fell in your arms makes me regret all the time I spent with you I wish we had never met Awful memories of that night thought you felt the same you were alright but in reality you were playing a game Why did I fall to the awful games you played What was I thinking I should have never stayed For as long as I tried and as long as you weren't there and for every lie you told me you didn't even care |
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Jennie New Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 5 |
That poem says it all in how guys will do anything to get some. They say they care but they only got one thing on their mind. It hurts when it ends like that. You're really good at writing though.. keep writing!! |
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Lonelypoet Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 123Conklin,NY,USA |
Jessica, Good poem, and unforunatly I have felt this too. I hope you feel better. |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Unfortunately, jennie is right. Sorry you were hurt by this guy, but there are lessons to be learned and you will be stronger and wiser in the future. Beware of the games! best wishes ~~nice writing~~ |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
wow, amazing poetry.. not a nice thing to write about though, from your own experiences.. I guess, there are just some brainless, heartless ppl out there, and u just gotta pick which ones. =( Lynne |
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Vball Chickie1624 Member
since 2000-05-14
Posts 116New York |
Great poem...but very sad. Look to the future, and keep writing, you're good at it. - Danielle "Dream what you want to dream; go where you want to go; be what you want to be, because you have only one life and one chance to do all the things you want to do." "The role of a writer is not to say what we can all say, but what we are unable to say." - Anais Nin "Follow your own heart, not others." |
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KiLeZ New Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 8 |
Very nice poem ;-)I know EXACTLY how you feel because i've been played WAAAY too many times, you should read my You Forgot..and PLAYAS poems on this forum, they will tell you alot. very nice ;-) |
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heatherbear Junior Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 48 |
This is SO VERY TRUE!!! Most guys just play you until they've got what they wanted. Unfortunetely we are the ones that get played!! I hope everything is allright now!! Don't think low of yourself now~it wasn't your fault!! YOu should read my newest poem posted today-it doesn't have a title yet-it asks for suggestions. ~~Heather~~ [This message has been edited by heatherbear (edited 05-21-2000).] |
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