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Jessica182
Junior Member
since 2000-03-20
Posts 15


0 posted 2000-05-18 07:07 PM


Your love is like burried roses
Under fresh soil
The fresh blood
That just came to a boil

The roses that survived under the trees
The cold wind that blew
Still did not prevent
These roses that grew

Forgive these roses
while they burst into flames
The bueaty has been destroyed
And so has the games

Take these ashes
And cherish them son
For these are the roses
That grew without the sun

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Danny Holloway
Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
1 posted 2000-05-19 12:03 PM


Interesting peom you have written.  Lots of expression and imagery!
~~nice writing~~

TearsOfPearls
Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 322
Vereeniging, South-Africa
2 posted 2000-05-19 08:11 PM


Nice poem and like Danny said full of expression and imagery.

I especially like the last four lines.  

brian madden
Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374
ireland
3 posted 2000-05-20 04:39 PM


That was a great poem, I love the imagery

Your love is like burried roses
Under fresh soil

The cold wind that blew
Still did not prevent
These roses that grew

Forgive these roses
while they burst into flames
The bueaty has been destroyed
And so has the games

Take these ashes
And cherish them son
For these are the roses
That grew without the sun



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