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Tamma
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In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

0 posted 2000-05-18 03:40 PM


Daddy, I'm your little girl,
And I've had my heart broken.

Daddy, I'm falling for him,
Why can’t you just understand?

Daddy, can you pick me up,
And put my heart together.

Daddy, I’m just growing up,
I still need you by my side.

Daddy, thanks for everything,
Thank you for loving me so.



 (if ya ever wanna chat, you can IM me on AOL: sexikitticat -or- pom16pom)


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Danny Holloway
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since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
1 posted 2000-05-19 11:40 AM


A Daddy's love is often expressed most in the effort he will make to protect his daughter.  Understand that it's tough love sometimes, but it's the best there is.
~nice writing tamma~~

Isabelle
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since 1999-08-25
Posts 176
Indiana
2 posted 2000-05-19 07:15 PM


This poem was real good. Keep up the good work.

 "Poetry is the music of the souls, and above all, of great and feeling souls."
~Voltaire~


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