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Jimmy
Junior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 42
Oak Grove

0 posted 2000-05-17 11:31 PM


Love Is Now Gone
Im Still in love, but we have both moved on
The love I thought would never end is now gone

I think of her every night as I sleep,
I still stay awake, restless as I weep.

I cannot call her, I cannot be around,
Anywhere I am, she is now no longer to be found.

I miss her soo much, yet now I am sure,
The love she had for me, was never once pure,

Thats alright, they say life is hard,
You have to just play the hand, card by card.

I have lost this hand, but live for the next deal,
Now I know, I can never show someone exactly how I feel.

As soon as you show it, your out of luck,
Your heart is held, should I say just plain stuck.

I thought I had found my one true love, but no,
My heart took it all, the swift hard blow.

I will go one and find someone new,
But to her, In my heart I will always have a place for you.

© Copyright 2000 Jimmy VanNatta - All Rights Reserved
Yu Lan
Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462
New Zealand
1 posted 2000-05-18 02:07 AM


Jimmy.. this is a beautiful poem, I can't say a lot.. I'm not quite sure what to say, so.. sorrowful.. yeah, u never know, maybe things will work out the way u always wanted them to.. but, you can't go breaking your heart.. if/when it doesn't (well, hehe, u could, but I don't advise it.. =P)

well written, a stunning poem..

Lynne




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