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Tamma
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0 posted 2000-05-17 06:40 PM


Once upon a lonely moment,
I sit and wonder about him.

I wonder what his lips feel like,
I wonder when he’ll steal my heart.

I wonder if it’s too late,
Could I have already fallen?



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1 posted 2000-05-17 08:44 PM


This is a wonderful poem, it says a lot in just a few words. Yes, love can be a confusing thing, I hope you figure it out!

 "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde

Danny Holloway
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2 posted 2000-05-18 11:23 AM


Tamma, sounds like you have fallen! Hope it works out for you.  Love makes for good inspiration when it come to poetry.  So, hope you continue to write.
best wishes to you!
dh

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