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Courtney
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since 2000-05-16
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0 posted 2000-05-17 01:04 PM


                  Friends Are
                        By Rebekah H.

For my best friend Leslie Brown
              

                 Friends Are
        
            F orever there for us
            R eady to listen to our problems
            I n our lives always
            E nd their days with us in their prayers
            N ever too busy to not be able to listen
            D eals that will not be broken
            S o loving and caring at all times



 

© Copyright 2000 Courtney - All Rights Reserved
Danny Holloway
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since 2000-01-15
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1 posted 2000-05-17 01:26 PM


Friends are all you say and more....
I really like Acrostic poems.  You did a nice job with this one.
~~good creative writing~~


 A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives.


Daysleeper
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since 2000-04-23
Posts 119

2 posted 2000-05-17 10:58 PM



Very nice acrostic... we don't see many of those here. Keep up the good writing.

...Daysleeper...



 "We prefer to do things comfortably" said the Controller.
"But I don't want comfort. I want God, I want poetry, I want real danger, I want freedom, I want goodness. I want sin."
"In fact," said Mustapha Mond, "you're claiming the right to be unhappy."
"Alright then," said the Savage defiantly, "I'm claiming the right to be unhappy." -Aldous Huxley "Brave New World"



ESP
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since 2000-01-25
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Floating gently on a cloud....
3 posted 2000-05-18 06:38 AM


Friends are such special people, just like you described. Lovely description of lovely people!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

Courtney
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since 2000-05-16
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4 posted 2000-05-18 10:03 AM


thanx u guys!i really appreciate it!gotta to back to writing!-Rebekah

 

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