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Frosty
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since 2000-05-06
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0 posted 2000-05-16 06:58 PM


Your emerald glittery eyes
Sparkled in the moonlight
You mocked losers
And it was funny until
You mocked me
Yet I still loved you
Now that your gone
I cry at your grave
And feel the words carved in stone that bare your name
Your beautiful name
I'll remember it forever
Even when you didn't care about mine
I could have sworn you loved me
But fate never lies
And I was wrong
But when you cried for me
I thought it was real
Love is so deceiving



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Deranger
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since 2000-05-10
Posts 498
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1 posted 2000-05-16 07:19 PM


Sorry dude, life sucks...

But dont let it drag ya down, no one ever said life was easy, and i dont mean to insult you by suggesting you thought it was a easy raod to take, but i guess no one really gets the choice to start, only to end.

Great poem, and no matter what any chich says, they can be just a cruel as guys can. But i guess you know that?


LoveBug
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2 posted 2000-05-16 10:15 PM


I can relate to this poem very well... teasing is a million times worse when it comes from someone you love... and it still hurts when they leave, as you tell us beautifully. Your last line is so true...

 "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde

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