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Ana Junior Member
since 2000-05-15
Posts 16iLLINOIs |
If I could go back to that day... That day I met you and let your lips brush mine, I would awaken. I woud see what happened and the spell I was going to be under. The posion candy on your lips The sweet venom on your tongue And I would have known better Than to ask for the first taste. But now I lay in soft grass And crave the posion And yearn for the venom Letting the candy melt how I melt. |
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Frosty Junior Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 17 |
Ummm, wow, I love the title. It's such a powerful piece. Great |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
Geez, this forum is really picking up!!! Wow this is deep...ah...too deep, confusing slow Deranger...brain overloading...drain bamage! Deranger thinks poem much good! Lots happy for Ana! |
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Daysleeper Member
since 2000-04-23
Posts 119 |
Ana- Wow... this peice is amazing! It's so understandably true and beautiful, and yet frightening at the same time. Gorgeous. ...Daysleeper... "We prefer to do things comfortably" said the Controller. "But I don't want comfort. I want God, I want poetry, I want real danger, I want freedom, I want goodness. I want sin." "In fact," said Mustapha Mond, "you're claiming the right to be unhappy." "Alright then," said the Savage defiantly, "I'm claiming the right to be unhappy." -Aldous Huxley "Brave New World" |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Wow!!! This is great! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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