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Courtney
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since 2000-05-16
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0 posted 2000-05-16 12:52 PM


                
For my best friend Leslie Brown,who means so much to me.I Love You!

        Written On My Heart
                     by Rebekah Hartley

You Are Forever Written On My Heart
For the Flowers you Have Grown
For the Love you Have Shown

You Are Forever Written On My Heart
For always Being There
Always for Your Care

You Are Forever Written On My Heart
I'll Always Love You and Cherish You
And Never Forget You
Thankyou for Being My Best Friend


 

© Copyright 2000 Courtney - All Rights Reserved
Frosty
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since 2000-05-06
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1 posted 2000-05-16 04:41 PM


That was a cute poem, I love the rhyme scheme, it was such a short, sweet poem. I liked it.  
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2 posted 2000-05-16 05:25 PM


Welcome to Passions! Best friends are hard to find, but wonderful to possess. I loved this poem. I'll be looking for more of your work soon!

 "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde

Courtney
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since 2000-05-16
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3 posted 2000-05-17 09:54 AM


Thank you for all you replies!This was my first poem to write.I'm working on more poems just for you!And by the way,my real name is Rebekah,but look under Courntey for my latest poems!Love ya!

 

Danny Holloway
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4 posted 2000-05-17 01:25 PM


Sincere feelings expressed in poetry is a wonderful gift to a friend.
Welcome to Passions.  Will be looking for more of your poetry.
~~nice writing~~


 A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives.


ESP
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since 2000-01-25
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Floating gently on a cloud....
5 posted 2000-05-18 09:26 AM


This is very sweet! I have really enojoyed all of your poetry so far...keep posting!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

sKiTtLeS
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since 2000-04-12
Posts 113
wisconsin, u.s.a.
6 posted 2000-05-18 01:32 PM


Very cute poem. I feel the same way about my own best friend.    Keep up the good work!  

 sKiTtLeS~

Deranger
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since 2000-05-10
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Somewhere, between here and there
7 posted 2000-05-19 02:53 AM


Unconditional love of a best friend...

Short and sweat, (opposed to long and questionable, as i favor to write)  Just remember that friends are what life's all about, don't let them slip through your hands!

Deranger (should go to bed or maybe study for the Spanish test tomorrow, but will probally do neither!)  

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