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Allynic New Member
since 2000-05-15
Posts 3 |
I wish I would forget that day The day I let you slip from my arms I wish that day didn't happen I wish that I would never break your heart But I did I wish I was dead today Because of seeing you in so much pain I wish that you were mine again I wish I didn't hurt you But I did I wish I was more happier now But I'm not, because I don't have you I wish I could have treated you better I wish I didn't lose the only guy I loved But I did [This message has been edited by Allynic (edited 05-15-2000).] |
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Vball Chickie1624 Member
since 2000-05-14
Posts 116New York |
Very true poem, and I can definately relate to it. It stinks not realizing you love someone until they're gone...but you just have to take life as it comes. Great poem. - Danielle "Dream what you want to dream; go where you want to go; be what you want to be, because you have only one life and one chance to do all the things you want to do." - Anonymous |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Hi! Welcome to Passions! This is a beautifully written poem, but the past is gone. You should look towards the future, and not wish your life away. Check your e-mail!  "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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Lucius Cade Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 235Saskatchewan |
Very true poem, I know what its like when you want to take things you did back, Lucidity is the answer to all problems |
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